The magical dust, shed by the moon
and the melodious song sung by your lips
Woke me from my deep sleep,
I opened my eyes and I saw you.
Silhouetted in the mirror, I saw-
your image, receding from my window.
Your anklets were giggling,
with the rhythm of your footsteps.
You were singing a forgotten song,
Sorry, I couldn’t make out the words.
Your hair, as dark as moonless night,
were dancing with the tune of your song.
You sailed away, leaving me
in the world of delusions.
I held you in my eyes,
Till your footsteps ceased to hear,
Till your song dissolved into the fog,
Till you vanished into nothingness.
Were you Dream?
Or was I dreaming?
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Hi,My first time here.I am impressed by your poetry, an unmistakable tinge of sadness to it. Wish to read more of yoursRegards
Thanks, bluebird, for the comment.I am very optimistic, but sometimes I come up with sad poems as this. I'm happy that you stopped by, to read my blog. Thanks again.
Thats a nice poem there Netha. You were in a very thoughtful mood while you penned it, weren't you? :)Lovely…
Very beautifully penned 🙂 It can't be lovelier than this Netha 🙂 Loved every line of it 🙂
@ child,I was half asleep when I penned it. Who am I to defy the mystical forces of subconsciousness? I chose to write it down as soon as I woke up from sleep.Thank you.@ SowmiThanks for the comment.
Apoem that speaks volume of a sensitive, imaginative heart
Beautiful. You are in quite a confusion, aren't you?Whether I am I, dreaming a dream,Or,Whether my dream is dreaming me.A big applause for this one. Keep writing.
@ Holy Lama, Thanks for your comment.@ Venu sir,I am honoured by your comment.Thanks for reading my blog.
nice blog…all the best…
Thanks Mr. Mufad, for the comment.
"Were you Dream?Or was I dreaming?"beautifully expressed.."Your hair, as dark as moonless night,"loved the way u expressed each emotion wid such amzing words..Keep penning!!Goodday!
Thanks, Swati, for your comment.Your poems are amazing, too….