Your eyes, filled with ocean
are dynamic, restless and blue.
I mistook that the Great Artist, the God-
had made a mistake in His unique creation
by painting them ocean blue, not muddy brown.
Poured in your eyes is the turbulence of the ocean.
I wonder the salty drops you weep belong to the deep blue sea.
are dynamic, restless and blue.
I mistook that the Great Artist, the God-
had made a mistake in His unique creation
by painting them ocean blue, not muddy brown.
Poured in your eyes is the turbulence of the ocean.
I wonder the salty drops you weep belong to the deep blue sea.
Blossoming Soul 
marvellous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bful work! :)(Just one suggestion….could you change the background to a lighter shade.. 😐 )
Touching.. I cried today… and this poem when I read.. felt like it was written for me!
good one 🙂
Excellent work ….the connection between eyes and ocean well explained in very few words….Keep writing Netha.
Splendid!loved the correalation here..good work netha :)keep writing 🙂
amaZin linesfew words and you captured it allgood workkeep em comming
Simply amazing lines…Absolutely loved it…Whose eyes were you talking about, huh? ;)Keep such wonderful poems coming in! 🙂
@ Latika didi and J.,Thanks for your valuable comments.
@ Hari, Sowmi, Destinys child, Bibi sir,Swati and Sorcerer,Thanks for your valuable comments. Keep reading…
really nice poem…Bt the title pic is quite scary..!!
@ Dhawal,Thanks a trillion!! I exactly had deep blue eyes in mind when I wrote this poem.