you still try to
rule the world
although I’ve got you
bound with arteries
and locked in a cage.
You are the sole prisoner
within my self, and the
guardian of my own soul.
How dare you beat
for somebody else
when you’re sure that
you’ll not leave me alive?
Straight to heart
14 thoughts on “Straight to heart”
i find it very strange….but still good..
Quite introspective in nature and true to the core of it.
@ Vaisakh,Thanks a trillion for the comment..It didn't occur to me that this one was strange..if so I'm happy that I've come up with the first strange post on my blog(smiles). Keep blogging, friend..(Forget ectopia cordis for the purpose of reading this post:))@Fareed,Thanks for the comment..Will come up with more poems of this kind..
gud work done
yikesss… what a rule
once,a friend asked me help on something very important to her,and i told her,in true paulo coelho fashion,listen to what her heart tells you..and she said,being a med student,hearts just a thing that beats,and eventually kills..somehow,thats the first thing your poem reminded me of..
@ Shalini,Thanks for the comment.
@ American Desi,Thanks for reading the post. Do visit again.
@ c. Soldier,Long since..Thanks a trillion for the comment..yes, heart is nothing but an organ that beats constantly to keep us alive..As a medical student, I have the same opinion as your other friend..
love is in the air
@ Sourcebound,Hey, no…No tinge of love in the poem, except that I've added the picture of pink heart along with the poem..Thanks for reading my blog.
scientifically poetic! tats ironical! very nice..i l-i-k-e-d:)
Dis is one of d best thngs i have ever read on any of the blogs…How dare you beat for somebody else.When you're sure that you'll not leave me alive?its a masterpiece…vowwww…
🙂 that just made me blush, very short but the fact of life..have the same problem,… my heart rules my deeds and kills me every moment,.. but i cannot chanage myself..very true…very sweet…